- In the first section of Part II, Coates describes the way he learned about Prince Jones’s death and the circumstances surrounding it. Choose one of the following ways for approaching this section and write 5-8 sentences in response.
- Option 1: Prince Jones was a college friend, but after his killing Coates says he was “the superlative of all my fears” (81). Make at least one text-to-text connection to explain how Jones becomes emblematic of Coates’ fears. Which fears?
In this section, Coates reveals many of his fears and especially those that were added or simply heightened in the welcoming of his son into the world. But Coates’ most profound fear was leaving Samori without a father. As fatherlessness is one of the biggest issues facing black Americans today, Coates greatly feared Samori becoming a victim of this tragedy. That he would, as Prince was, be “not killed by a single officer so much as he was murdered by his country and all the fears that have marked it from birth” (Coates 78). In an elaborately detailed view of what the police could take away from black people unjustly, Coates writes:
“And the plunder was not just of Prince alone. Think of all the tuitions for Montessori and music lessons. Think of the gasoline expended, the treads worn carting him to football games, basketball tournaments, and Little League. Think of the time spent regulating sleepovers. Think of the surprise birthday parties, the daycare, and the reference checks on babysitters. Think of World Book and Childcraft. Think of checks written for family photos. Think of credit cards charged for vacations. Think of soccer balls, science kits, chemistry sets, racetracks, and model trains. Think of all the embraces, all the private jokes, customs, greetings, names, dreams, all the shared knowledge and capacity of a black family injected into that vessel of flesh and bone. And think of how that vessel was taken, shattered on the concrete, and all its holy contents, all that had gone into him, sent flowing back into the earth. Think of your mother, who had no father. And your grandmother, who was abandoned by her father. And your grandfather, who was left behind by his father. And think of how Prince’s daughter was now drafted into those solemn ranks and deprived of her birthright- that vessel which was her father, which brimmed with twenty-five years of love and was the investment of her grandparents and was to be her legacy.” (Coates 81 and 82)
This passage is so long but it completely encompasses the capacity of what killing a man, a father can take away from a family. Coates describes how he wouldn’t want any of the love, time, work, energy, money he puts into his son to be exterminated in a single moment in an act of ignorance. I find it strange how Coates is so disheartened by all of the plunder of material wealth that was invested into the life of Prince Jones. It is as if he disagrees with the notion that these things still had value and purpose in Prince’s life even though it was cut short so tragically and suddenly. It is as if he’s saying that all of those things were spent for nothing, which I would disagree with. In conclusion, Coates is terrified of the possibility that everything he has put into Samori and will put into him, will go to waste in a single moment, the way that it occurred with Prince Jones.
4. Offer ONE SIGNIFICANT PASSAGE you will be prepared to read and offer as a vehicle for class discussion. Quote the passage and write a few sentences explaining WHY you chose it and WHAT you’d like us to discuss in it.
“I was out of sync with the city. I kept thinking about how southern Manhattan had always been Ground Zero for us. They auctioned our bodies down there, in that same devastated, and rightly named, financial district. And there was once a burial ground for the auctioned there. They built a department store over part of it and then tried to erect a government building over another part. Only a community of right-thinking black people stopped them. I had not formed any of this into a coherent theory. But I did know that Bin Laden was not the first man to bring terror to that section of the city. I never forgot that. Neither should you.” (Coates 86-87).
I chose this passage because Coates talks about something I never knew or thought about. I have never thought about the city of Manhattan and been reminded of the historically racist and inhumane actions of auctioning off slaves or burying them there. This passage heightened my curiosity to the point of researching the Manhattan Slave Market and it is definitely a well-known fact about the city to its inhabitants. There, at one time, was a slave market on the corner of Pearl Street and Wall Street in New York City where black bodies would be sold.
I found it interesting how this knowledge causes Coates to look at the situation of September 11th in a much different light than I’ve heard the majority think of it. What I would like to discuss is whether or not it seems that Coates is suggesting that industrial America is trying to cover up the darkness of Manhattan’s history by building “a department store over part of it and then tried to erect a government building over another part” (Coates 87). That fact within itself can be used as a metaphor by Coates to say that America and it’s government have been built on the oppression of black people as our government buildings are sitting on top of their buried bodies. Coates goes as far to say that Manhattan was “Ground Zero” for the African-American race. “Ground Zero” is a term used in reference to the ruins of the World Trade Center site. Therefore, it can be assumed that Coates is saying that Manhattan is also the site of the ruins of the African race, or at least their freedom. This informative section by Coates raises the question of what other important dark histories lie under the foundation of America and are yet to be discovered.